domingo, 8 de diciembre de 2013

Daniel's Life

Well, my name is Daniel Leon Chicoma. I was born on June 15th 1993. I'm 20 years old. I live with my parents and my two siblings in Ventanilla-Callao. When I was a child I lived in Cercado de Lima then I moved and have been living in Ventanilla for 15 years. About my childhood, I think I had a great childhood, I spent the time with my friends, we played a lot of games in my neighborhood like "Escondidas", "Mata gente", and those kinds of games that has been replaced for tablets and cellphones in this generation. I also used to ride skate when I was 12 years but I had an accident in my head, I crashed against a light post, since then I stopped riding my skate. Well, about my life school, I studied all my life in the same school, Antonio Raymondi, where I met really good friends whom I still see. Then when I finished secondary, I started studying Computer Science at Idatur, and after that, I wanted to study English, I always liked it even when I was at school but at school I didn't pay it the enough attention, so I started studying at ICPNA, I've been studying there for more than two years. Now I want to focus on learning English perfectly, so I am going to take the methodology course when I finish the advanced course next year. About my goals, I have many goals in life that I want to achieve, but I would like to talk about only one, I’d like to work on a cruise ship (that's one of the reasons why i'm studying english), where I can make money and know all the world at the same time, and I’m conscientious that It is not going to be easy, but, I am also conscientious that if you want to get something in life you have to try very hard.

4 comentarios:

  1. Your composition is ok, but you have some mistakes. For example, in the last paragraph you have to correct 'to work in a cruise ship', you have to use ON instead of IN.

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  2. Here's another mistake, When you say: "since then I stop riding my skate" You have to use the simple past.

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  3. i think you have to correct the final part , but everything is ok except your life is boring!! just kidding xd

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  4. Thanks for the advice :D
    I'll try to correct them

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