The Unique Way to Have a Good Life: Communication
by Andrea Chirre
In my opinion parents and children
should pay more attention between each other.It is very important for parents to
be able to communicate openly and effectively with their children. Also
children need to have confidence to share any problems with their parents.
Now a days, the communication take
an important role in the life of each family because parents are busy all the
time so they have to believe that their children are fine during the time that
they are not with them.
For example, when children are in
school, there always exist the possibility that they can be victims of
bullying, so they have to believe that they can trust with their parents at any
situation and tell them that they have problems in school.
But when is the case of a teenager
its different because they feel that can´t trust their parents, they prefer to
talk with their friends and share their problems with them. That’s because
teenager have a different way to think and express, so they think that their
parents don’t understand them. I think that parents need to find some way to
talk with them.
On the other hand, children and
teenager have to think how much effort put their parents to talk with them.
Also teens have to think that their parents are always worried about them.
So I think that children and
teenager have to respect their parents and appreciate how much love their
parents give to them.
To conclude, I think that the base
of any happy family is the communication, so parents need to take time to talk
with their children and ask them how was their day. Also children have do their
best and trust in their parents at any circunstance becuase they always want the best for their children.

good job!!
ResponderEliminarThank you! :D
ResponderEliminarI see eye to eye with you. Communication is very important between parents and their children.
ResponderEliminarAnd do not forget , "nowadays" is a single word and place an apostrophe in the first line of the third paragraph.
Good composicion, I agree with everything you wrote :D
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