by Eduardo Ayala
When I started dating my girlfriend I thought that we weren't going to be together the time that we are dating now, because we are totally different and all our friends told us that we were going to break up , even we thought in the same way at the beggining of our relathionship.Also,that time a boy was pretending her and my ex-girlfriend was pretending me.Besides that,I cheated on my girlfriend with my ex girlfriend who was pretending me because,my girlfriend used to treated me in a bad way and my ex-girlfriend treated me well.Also,my girlfriend liked the boy who was pretending her,after 4 months she cheated on me with a boy who met in the same day
Afortunately, after that,everything turned out better and since that days all is happiness.And now I feel totally in love with her and does too.Therefore, we are dating for a year and 2 months, besides that , we want to be together for the rest of our lifes .
Thank you for reading :) .
nice story i am not sure but i think you have to correct does too
ResponderEliminarmaybe not but take a look
It's a good story, but you have some spelling mistakes. To be more exactly, there are two mistakes in the third line and there is one mistake in the last paragraph. :))
ResponderEliminarWhat a crazy love story (Y)
ResponderEliminarJust try to correct the last paragraph, first line. If you're talking about something in plural, it should say: "Since those days all is happiness"